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May 2016

End of year Project – Sketchbook Punctuations

Today I have been working on a variety of rough sketches for possible designs of my punctuation mark/s.

Using the existing designs for punctuations I found previously as inspiration, I created a list of design ideas for some of the punctuation types. I chose to use the sarkmark, rhetorical mark and the interrobang mark for my chosen possible punctuations as I felt as if those were the easiest marks to understand the meaning of.

Most designs for the sark mark revolve around it being placed in front and behind the the sarcastic word or sentence, as I felt as if that would make highlighting the sarcasm within the sentence easier to see, as well as actually show where the sarcasm is should only a word needs to be used sarcasticly, not an entire sentaace.

The rytorical marks heavily focus on the use of a question mark as its main body as it shall only be used for questions (which are rhetorical). While I really like the simplistic idea of just having a question mark in reverse (to show that the question is not to be awnsered), I felt as if I should make my mark as unique as possible compared to it, as it would just be a carbon copy of something that already exsists (as well as make the whole project way too short and boring.

The interrobang mark was a bit more tricky to design as it already has a design which has similarities to some of my own previous ones, and finding one that reamebles its original purpose (sounding shocked within a question – e.g. “You did what?!”) without making it look too different. The most notable designs that I was able to make were the simple changes to the shape of the question mark curve of the design, or simply remove the curve completely to create a wilder looking exclamation mark to emphasis the feeling of shock.


In the end, I decided pick out the most notable designs from each mark type, as I want to create at least a little bit of a selection for possible choices. As of the current time, I am mostly leaning towards using the sarkmark as my chosen punctuation mark, as I feel as if it lead to the best looking designs out of the lot and could be considered the most easy punctuation to understand, as you simply need to put the marks before and after a sarcastic moment or word in order to emphasise that sarcasm (even if it is within a sentence itself.

Punctuation Research

Whilst looking up images of existing types of punctuations, I ended up discovering that many people had created their own punctuation marks within the past of which not many people today know about or use. The page that I found them on included the following:

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I am somewhat surprised to find out that there is currently forms of punctuation that I never even seen or heard of before. The fact that there are exciting forms of these punctuation may mean that the time I expected to come up with a feasible design may not be as long as I first imagined, as there is now so much inspiration in front of me to push me onward.

Looking at the more notable/interesting punctuations (e.g. sarcmark, doubt point, interrobang) has given me a few possible ideas at this time, which I will go further into within my sketchbook.


Source and Credit:

http://mentalfloss.com/article/59071/little-known-punctuation-marks-national-punctuation-day 

Environment – Putting the Pieces Together (Final Design)

With the text now improved, the photos now sorted and the layout put into place, I have final been able to complete the final design for my double page spreads.

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With only a small problem with the image quality, which was later discovered to just be me having used lower-quality versions of the photos, which I simply replaced with the original high quality ones (via Ctrl + D), the spreads have turned out better than I originally expected them to be. I feel as if the white

Environment – Writing up the Description

Today I have been busy doing the write up for what will be the text for the second spread within the final design. As with the limitations set by the project, the minimum amount of words that must be included is 200, with the maximum about that I can add being 400 words.

Here is the original version of the text I created:

“From the moment I moved into my little home in Kent with my family as a child, I always found the garden to be a bit of an urban paradise to me. Unlike our old home, this garden was big and green and (unlike the last one) peaceful. I used play game after game with my baby brother, taking every moment upon that grass with the upmost joy. It was our own little land. But, every place has its own shadow, and ours was no exception.

The end of the garden was always a mystery to us, but I rarely every wanted to set foot in that place, not for very long at least. It was always dark, dirty and bug ridden (all of which I was never too keen on). There was a shed, a bonfire, a ranch pile, and a small spot within the corner fenced off by a pair of old doors that served as a compost heap. The trees at the very edge did not make the situation any better, as their loaming branches would always make you feel as if the entire sky above was constantly blocked out.

I never really felt confortable entering that little dark forest as a child, even now I still don’t, but today I decided that one could not truly enjoy a place until they see the very best of what it can show you. So, I picked up my camera, waited for a nice, sunny day and let my lens go wild. I tried to take as many close-up photos as I could in order to see each and every detail that each bit of scrap or mess of leaves had etched onto them. There was plenty of bits and pieces trapped within the overgrowth for me to find and plenty of angles that were absolutely wonderful to take.

What struck me most about doing this shoot is how sometimes you can never understand how beautiful something can be, no mater how messy, until you see it from the right perspective, as looking up into the sky during the shoot, I saw how open the sky actually looked through the branches.

It kind of surprises me how easily a photographer can go to a place and not only get some decent photos, but also learn so much it and how should look at other places too.”


After finishing this copy of the text, I had the page checked over by a teacher in order to ensure that the text is both spelled correctly as it always should, and also relevant to the tasks requirements, as it must explain the reasoning and methods used within the photo-shoot.

After handing in a printed copy of the text, I received it back with some improvements. Luckily, the only improvements needed were a couple of simple spelling errors and unneeded punctuation placements, as the reviewing teacher gave the “OK” to the contents of the text itself. The errors only consisted of things such as “upmost” instead of “utmost”, as well as other similar miss-phrasing/spelling.

With the text now corrected and and approved, I moved it into the spread, changing it into my selected typeface. With a few tweaks to the size and shape of the lettering, the text now fits perfectly into the spread.

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I am actually rather proud of how the type look now that it has been finally into the text box, as the white, serifed type personally feels like compliments the natural tone of the piece, and the way that the text curves around the frame adds a very nice look to the overall design.

Environment – Feedback 2

After having had my first review with my classmate, I decided that it would be best to try asking even more people about what they thought about the designs of the two spreads. However, the results of this review had a few notable changes suggested about the choices I had made from the previous one, namely about the design theme overall.

The main improvement suggested to me this time was to decrease the thickness of the branch on the second spread. This change was asked as the reviewers noted that the large size of the whit branch drew too much attention to itself, causing people to focus too on the branch rather than the photos themselves. I actually understood this point rather quickly, as taking a step back, I saw that the distracting thing on the pages was the branch. In order to fix this, I simply moved the edges of the branch closer together so that it appeared thinner, and made the images appear larger and more noticeable.

The same issue of the silhouettes I added being too much also spilled onto the first spread as well, as others noted that the tree within the pages’ center is to distracting from the photo behind it. Because of this, they have asked if I removed the tree itself entirely, so that the focus could be put onto the background. They did note however that the location of the title was perfectly fine, as it drew a little more focus to the trash heap above it, which could be considered the most detailed part of the picture.

I am a little bit hesitant about the idea of removing the tree, as the collision of it being good because of its uniqueness against it being bad for being a distraction, makes it a little hard to make the choice. However, I believe that having an effective design takes a little more priority over a unique one, as it doesn’t matter how pretty a design is if it dose not focus on the most important aspects of the piece. As such, I have removed the tree from the spread.

The only other tweak mentioned for me to do was to simply increase the darkness of the black filter behind the text, as they noted that it was still a little harder to read in some places.


I have found that much of this feedback very useful in helping me understand the importance of how designs can effect the focus of an audience, and how I must learn to accept the fact that if a design inflicts will the purpose of my work, I must remove it, no matter how much I myself may like it.

Environment – Acting on Feedback

With the helpful tips and advice given to me by the review from my classmates, I have begun experimenting with new prototype designs for the final product.

As the previous post on the the review itself mentioned, my classmates gave me several useful pieces of advice for which I could use within my new designs, all of which I have actually acted upon, as I want to create designs which fits the expectations of both my audience, as well as other designers (such as my classmates).

The first notable change I made was to use both versions of the prototype introduction spread pages (the tree and branch silhouette designs), as it was noted the the branched design could be used as an effective page design for second spread pages, where the bulk of writing will be placed.

Second, I removed the pink placeholder spaces on the first spread as I no longer wish to use the image idea on the tree anymore.

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Thirdly, I began filling in the spaces with the branch spread with the pen tool, so that the spaces were all filled in separately. This would allow me to go onto the following step.

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Using a trick I learned when doing the “Something Different” project, I dragged and drop my chosen images onto these filled in spaces, causing the photos to fit inside of the shapes and sit neatly between the branches of the silhouette. For the area in which I will place the text, I chose to use the photo I took of the trees looming above me, as I personally like the image (as well as my classmate) and I believe that the cluster of leaves to the right would serve as an excellent background for the type itself.

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Next I began placing placeholder text for the second spread, as I wanted to see how the current type I was using would looking the space of the image I had chosen.

However, after putting down the text over the image, I noticed that some parts where there were gaps within the leaves, the white text became somewhat difficult to read, as it blended in with the background. In order to stop this, I place a dark, translucent cover over the image to act as a sort of filter and darken the photo just enough so that the text is a little clearer for reading.

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I believe that this newer version is an excellent improvement on the previous, as not does it bring back a good deal of brightness to the page, but the parts of the image where the dark and light meet appears almost seamless against each other, even to the point where it almost looks like the darkened area was part of the original area.


Overall, I am extremely happy with the current results of my work, as it is so far meeting the expectations that I had when first starting this project. If I had anything to pick on though as a flaw, it would be that the current quality for the images is not very good at the current time, and thus will need to be improved in time for the final product. Other than that, I have other complaints .

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